Also note how the subplot involving the fiancee with hurt feelings is resolved in one panel and a caption. Compare to a post-1961 comic book, where this soap opera material might stretch over pages.
Hypnotizing one-on-one is a skill any Hero can attempt, but hypnotizing a whole room full of people seems more like a power or spell. Although, from panel 4, it appears the general's staff is just this one soldier next to him.
I, admittedly, have no Air Force experience, but it seems to me that the bombers are dive bombing, not circling. I was skeptical of this until I looked it up, but dive bombing is a thing because angling down towards the target actually helps aim the bombs with greater accuracy. I would have thought dropping them straight down would be better, but this is why no one asks me to plan bombing missions.
Here we have another diagram that looks cool but doesn't really tell us how it works. Luckily this one is a very familiar one, the cliche of a ray that kills engines.
A nice twist is that the bad guys have a ray gun too. A dissolving raygun? The caption said it sprayed corrosive liquid, but that seems unlikely that a squirt gun would be that accurate while traveling at airplane speeds.
I'm not sure why we need to see the inside of a flask to get how it works. It's kinda neat that it shows us how the gasses get mixed inside it, but by pulling back to the curtain to show us the "science" it reveals two made-up gas names, riaton and oxothygen. I think we were better off with the ray guns that look technical but reveal nothing of how they work.
I have never encountered this use of "I'm all in!" before, which seems here to mean "I'm completely spent!" rather than "Yeah, let's do this!"
It's nice that even the narrator in the caption of panel 6 realized how hard it is to believe that the plane just happens to come down at his fiancee's house. That should tell you there's something wrong with your story when even your own fictional narrator doesn't believe it.
Here's a rare cutaway view of a hideout. Although the map only shows three soldiers on the ground floor and one guard on the upper floor, it seems that there are four men on the ground floor after all. Or one of them withstood the Wizard's surprise attack. Or the guard from upstairs came down. Or maybe a guard from outside joined in. It's important that the players never learn exactly what they're up against no matter how well they prepare.
"Eggscape"? That's a German accent?
"Phial" is an unusual word you don't see every day. And invisible gas is equally rare in a comic book.
Ho.Mg4? Holmium Magnesium? Seems like that would be extremely dangerous, even if that was a real isotope.
Heroes always manage to pull out a last bit of strength when needed, as if their weaknesses were just flavor text.
I'm also uncomfortable with the near limitless range of the Wizard's Message power; this has to be a higher level version (Greater Messaging?) of how I envision the power working.
I don't see how a contra-gravity flask would let him run super-fast through the air, but maybe he's buffed with both Fly and Race the Plane to get that speed?
Hey Wizard, are you seriously leaving your fiancee tied up?








